He’s with someone else now. He went with her. To someone else’s house. To someone else’s bed. In someone else’s life. He was my dog.
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Hint Fiction is the new Haiku. Tell a story in 25 words or less.
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February 4th, 2013 at 12:56 am
Short, clear, loaded with emotion. Loved it.
February 4th, 2013 at 5:54 am
This is very cool. I have been working on Flash Fiction of 250 words or less. Now a new refinement and you did it so well. I love it. – John
February 4th, 2013 at 8:11 am
Interesting, here I was thinking 1000 words was a really short piece of fiction….How wrong I was! May try it
February 4th, 2013 at 8:38 am
I enjoyed that very much. Well done!
February 4th, 2013 at 10:34 am
Very powerful…and in so few words!
February 5th, 2013 at 5:51 am
Just 25 words to tears in my eyes. Amazing…
February 5th, 2013 at 12:33 pm
Wow, an entire story in five lines. Excellent!
February 6th, 2013 at 8:37 pm
Dogs are supposed to be loyal. Traitor!
February 9th, 2013 at 11:51 am
[...] I don’t know that I can be good at this writing exercise. I read a post by David Allen at http://allenfiction.com/2013/02/04/custody/ on hint fiction. Extra short stories are now blooming in my mind. A profusion of blossoms both [...]
March 13th, 2013 at 9:51 pm
Wish
Looking into space and wishing I was there. Too late for me as I struggle for breath and sigh…